There are many things that I can't be told, as I am too 'young'.
I don't like it, but I understand.
I need to drive with a running commentary run by my 'well-wishers' in the back seat.
I don't like it, but I understand.
I need to study 'hard' for results.
I don't like it, but I understand.
'She' is happy with someone else.
I don't like it, but I understand.
People fail to see beyond the 'loud' me.
I don't like it, but I understand.
All my 'friends' are slowly moving away.
I don't like it, but I understand.
My best mate is hardly available when I need him the most.
I hate that I understand it, but I understand.
22 comments:
nice...... :) , the last line is perfect but coming from u it sounds quite expressive , if u r getting what i mean.
@ Mulan: Thnx, but actually I didn't get wat u meant.
ummm......i meant , that its unusual to see something so expressive from u , i mean atleast in such an open space.
@ Mulan: Ohh...maybe u r right! Looks like yesterday REALLY sucked! :-D
hehe...... :)
do u really???
@ Anon: Well, I think I do. It is possible that from someone else's perspective, I may not.
nice one..vry bful lines especially the last two stanzas..
@ Ritu: Thanks. Ur recent posts are also pretty good...will comment after midterms! :-)
Woah..the 14th of Feb brought this on??? :-D
Very good one Sumo!!! Bravo!!!! Prima!!!
@ Everyman: Hey Shain...good to see u back here!!! Yeah, it kinda did...crappy day and all!!! He he!!!
good stuff!! I didn't know you wrote poetry!!! am impressed!!
I'm back in action, and plan to stay there! :)
@ Princess: Hey...welcome back!!! BTW, everyone keeps saying it is poetry!!! I was not aware of that!!!
of-course it is!! nothing else pulls at the heart strings quite the same way! :)
check my deadish blog too :)
@ Princess: Hmm...if u say so!!! Will chk ur blog now!!! :D
I really hope you are not in the same place anymore .Really beautiful .Simple and yet very convincingly painful And as always it displays your best quality...reaching out to people .
@ Shruti: Thanks!!! :D Yeah, actually I am in a much better place now!
Sumo, is there any way we can help you understand things better?
I wish, Sharad...I wish!!!
Touched a chord somewhere..
@ Ileen: Thnx!
Nice!!
I don't like it, but I understand.
Just kidding!
both simple, and complex.
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